My name is Ryo Baba. I'm 19 years old. I'm from Saga. I am a male. My birthday is November 29. My favorite food is cheese burger. My blood type is B. My favorite color is red. I hate tomato and ghost. My hobby is sleeping, playing the guitar, eating and drinking. I like the best thing is drinking. My favorite musician is slipknot, stone sour, BFMV and more. I am 176 centimeters in height and I am 65 kilograms. My eyes are black. My hair is black. There are 5 peoples in my family. I have father, mother, two old sisters and I have a dog.
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Hey, your hobby is so more than you taught me it.∑(´･ω･|||)
返信削除Hi Ryo,
返信削除Though you make it sound like you have more than one hobby, that is, "playing the guitar", I wonder how the other activities or behaviors that you've listed, especially the one you say you like the best, will sound to a prospective home stay family. What else do you think a family would want to know before they welcome you into their home?
I also wonder why you have labeled this post "revisions." Essay 1-01a, due April 12, should be your first complete draft essay, 250 or more words in length, labeled "drafts, essays". Then Essay 1-01b, due April 17, in a separate post with the labels "essays, revisions", should be even longer, and show what information you've added and other revisions that you've made.
Cheers.